Here is the proposal, much more simple than the first one. There is a great distress in designing a game with a interactive narrative in the game design community that’s why I was very challenged when the game had to be narrative so that’s why it took me a long time to design it.

If you don’t believe me here is a video : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RKfBSUKI9PA

The proposal pdf: http://www.scribd.com/doc/130296004/Lumina